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©2008-2009 ~Undistilled
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Thank you to everyone who has commented on this poem. :)

Comments, critiques, opinions, suggestions, objections, and edits are all welcome from any and all interested and/or affected parties.



     ...which probably means you.
:paranoid:




EDITS:

Changed the spelling of:

kuwaii to kawaii
picks to pics
DevineAngel to DivineAngel

Added new stanza about furries, fetishists, and butthurt.

Added Fella images courtesy of ^devart.

Comments


:iconflyinpingu:
This is quite possibly the best thing I have ever read. I'd offer some critique, but I'm no writer, especially when it comes to poetry.

"Kat is showing pics of cocks"

Lulz.

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ETERNAL LOATHING DEVICE
:iconundistilled:
Thank you. :thanks:

    ...and almost every word of it is true. :lol:

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:iconflyinpingu:
At first when I got to the part where it said Shadowgamers came back I was like, when did he write this? :O

Then I read the part where he got banned again. =P

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ETERNAL LOATHING DEVICE
:iconundistilled:
I've been writing this over the course of the last month and updating it as necessary when things change.

:)

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:iconflyinpingu:
Well, all that effort was definitely worth it. :thumbsup:

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ETERNAL LOATHING DEVICE
:iconpsowill:
:slow: I have nothing to add to this except damn i wasn't expecting to be in there. Quite a few regulars I'm surprised you didn't include.

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WE RULE SHIT- Penn and Teller.

Kill the redhead and take the Wookie instead. ~UltraBeavis
:iconpsowill:
:lol: I wonder how bg your hit list is anyways.

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WE RULE SHIT- Penn and Teller.

Kill the redhead and take the Wookie instead. ~UltraBeavis
:iconmixedpie:
This is officially one of my favorite poems ever. EVER.

I wish I had some actual crit... but I can't stop loling to think straight. :lol:

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Not here. Dropping in occasionally, but still, don't consider me back.

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