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Poetically Deviant by ~Undistilled:iconUndistilled:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2008-2009 ~Undistilled
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Artist's Comments

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Thank you to everyone who has commented on this poem. :)

Comments, critiques, opinions, suggestions, objections, and edits are all welcome from any and all interested and/or affected parties.



     ...which probably means you.
:paranoid:



EDITS:

Changed the spelling of:

kuwaii to kawaii
picks to pics
DevineAngel to DivineAngel

Added new stanza about furries, fetishists, and butthurt.

Added Fella images courtesy of ^devart.

Comments


:iconflyinpingu:
~FlyinPingu Jun 30, 2008, 6:24:16 PM
This is quite possibly the best thing I have ever read. I'd offer some critique, but I'm no writer, especially when it comes to poetry.

"Kat is showing pics of cocks"

Lulz.

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ETERNAL LOATHING DEVICE
:iconundistilled:
~Undistilled Jun 30, 2008, 6:25:27 PM
Thank you. :thanks:

    ...and almost every word of it is true. :lol:

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glass images
glass studio images
photography images
:iconflyinpingu:
~FlyinPingu Jun 30, 2008, 6:27:05 PM
At first when I got to the part where it said Shadowgamers came back I was like, when did he write this? :O

Then I read the part where he got banned again. =P

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ETERNAL LOATHING DEVICE
:iconundistilled:
~Undistilled Jun 30, 2008, 6:28:15 PM
I've been writing this over the course of the last month and updating it as necessary when things change.

:)

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glass images
glass studio images
photography images
:iconflyinpingu:
~FlyinPingu Jun 30, 2008, 6:32:10 PM
Well, all that effort was definitely worth it. :thumbsup:

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ETERNAL LOATHING DEVICE
:iconpsowill:
=PSOWILL Jun 30, 2008, 6:39:43 PM
:slow: I have nothing to add to this except damn i wasn't expecting to be in there. Quite a few regulars I'm surprised you didn't include.

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WE RULE SHIT- Penn and Teller.

Kill the redhead and take the Wookie instead. ~UltraBeavis
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=PSOWILL Jun 30, 2008, 6:42:59 PM
:lol: I wonder how bg your hit list is anyways.

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WE RULE SHIT- Penn and Teller.

Kill the redhead and take the Wookie instead. ~UltraBeavis
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~Mixedpie Jun 30, 2008, 6:45:25 PM
This is officially one of my favorite poems ever. EVER.

I wish I had some actual crit... but I can't stop loling to think straight. :lol:

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Not here. Dropping in occasionally, but still, don't consider me back.
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